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Something more than nothing Sitting alone trying to feel what I should feel I wish I could feel something more than nothing I need you I need someone to hold onto I need someone real someone who knows how the emptiness can blow your guts apart. Inward my thoughts fly inward feeding visions of my wants nourishing the aches of my needs in here they are safe and I feel so no one here to discard them neglect or abuse them here they are something more than nothing. Thinking too much feeling too little too self-absorbed to offer to you any true substance of what you may want what you may need what you may feel what you have to feel something more than nothing something more than me. Something real something to hold each one to another or apart if necessary we can('t)choose who to love but not who loves us I cannot feel what I cannot touch I cannot make you feel what I feel for you or you something for me. |
Additional Notes:
Trying to finish it
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-12-24 12:23:57
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
This poems only begins to explain or does its best to describe the impossible maze of emotions that face us each day. The dizzying dialogue our souls find them selves in each day. You are so able to put to words the pain and confusion that allows other readers to know that they are not alone in this experience. This is where your talent and this poem truly shines. Bravo