This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2015-05-23 06:33:32 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The Omen

Blood the fountain of life force    taken by those that would divorce All semblance of human decency    in cremation of care regency Announcing depopulation in bold print    what gave them rights to time spent Plotting their deeds upon mankind     while Lucifer made sure Hale/Bopp                       was the sign

Copyright © May 2015 James C. Horak

Additional Notes:
Lucifer is the name the Jesuits gave their observatory in Arizona built to follow the comet Hale/Bopp.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2015-06-06 20:59:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I wonder why priest would choose that name, when what they were doing was about discovery. I would guess that is the point of your poem


This Poem was Critiqued By: Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. On Date: 2015-05-29 00:54:28
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Succinct. Well put. To the point. It is a gift to be able to get the message through and complete with an economy of words. Something I have never mastered. Thanks for the post and additional note. Medard
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