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Happenscape In the mind's eye, an earth in upheaval Surging heated contempt a cleansing flow as Renewing as intense Plodding time cannot chance alone cannot Spring the willow its grace give meaning to embrace Permit eloquence to that utterance closest to the heart |
Additional Notes:
The device I'm using here is what I call parallelism.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2013-06-24 13:49:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Intresting device. I read this piece four times in order to wholly take it in. Of course there is no tech errors. Reminds me very much of Shakesphere. Thank you for the poem and another tool for poets to use to express the sometimes inexpressable.