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I Live Outdoors dot nut Once upon a tiny dream an answer came to me. I gave up my mundane house to live in an RV. ~~*~~ Yes, it is easy to imagine that l could live here forever. Only minor nuiances, forcing me to act and react to follow and to lead, to work and to dream yes, I could stay here for a very long time driving myself to live life to it's fullest. Yes it's true, what has been said I have a screw loose in my head I was well trained and now I'm half drained but here I go, starting something new again. It's becoming more and more comfortable and though it is all new to me I dote myself with timeless thoughts of how happy life can be. And I've become a natural bride, a flower child still on the inside my tank half empty, or is it half full? I'm having so much fun that I really can't tell. ~~*~~ Once upon a pipe dream now in truth and no smoke screens I am happy to be outside on the inside. |
Additional Notes:
I bought an RV this past Sept. This was born of that. (smile)
This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2006-10-30 15:34:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.83333
Hi Ellen....what a humorous poem that is such a delight to read! So you are now a bonafide RV'er? I don't know if I would be that brave....would need to take someone with me for back up. I smiled all the way through this poem...having read it more than once just because I get such a kick out of it! I can't pick a favorite line or phrase as I love them all. well done....good for you!
Blessings....Marilyn