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Untitled And I thought of others other then yourself different from you in every way , just to say To try and get away from the pain you sway my way There is no doubt as to your beauty No restriction to your domain Only I choose to stray outside your limits away from your refrains |
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2013-11-24 11:15:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Self-discovery begins with self respect and the ability to pry ourselves away from obsession too often we allow dictated to us through our emotions. This poem heavily remarks on one type of that. But then again it is entirely focused on self. A higher relevance can be obtained by drawing a parallel with society as it does much the same thing as a collective by buying into lies that serve agenda. So many tragic events going on right now that need our attention as poets, poets who should not shirk our duty to inform in ways that reach others with truths they do not have. By paralleling your own with that proclivity on a larger stage with others, you obtain a universality beyond such confinement. JCH