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Blood Moon in hollows it hides. dark crevices - shadows, all those forbidden places where truth beclouds itself. its violent sweetness an implacable lure - a disguise unsighted in silence and veiled in counterfeit light. underworlds of storms that swell a heart with numbness and vacuity. shuddery songs of suffering chiming their red-stained words from mouths of madness. a stark-naked summons of mourning. I travel between eternities trying to shed this burning skin of lies and loss; but I am sentenced to solitary confinement within the exiled weightlessness of salvation; fossilized in cold isolation. . |
Additional Notes:
A Blood Moon is also known as the Hunter's Moon.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Donna Carter Soles On Date: 2012-07-25 22:38:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hello Mary,
This is quite an in-depth poem of darkness and madness. Who is there to know between the difference?
Hardly none, because this is your own personal punishment? Or it could be something that was written from the outside?
This is a good mystery poem, covered by darkness...not really letting the reader know what you are truly speaking of. It's not a dino fossil, is it? *smile*
I also wrote a poem called, "Blood Moon," that was written at an earlier time, and (apparently) had nothing to do with this poem - no clue about the other one. They (both of them) are quite different.
Good luck with your subjective poetry.
Donna