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This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2012-07-04 18:54:29 For the sake of supplying a little contextual integrity to this latest shit storm of yours. let me give the fine people a chronology of events: 1) You come onto my FaceBook trying to tell me how to critique on the basis of supposedly scaring off one of your friends. He has written a poem sublimating suicide. However, although I would think you would be adverse to that yourself under the circumstances, I don't go into that but treat him as I would anyone else, even comment that he has talent and demonstrates a gift at writing. I discourage his mood shown in the poem and give my reasons. Tough shit if you don't like it. Tough shit if he doesn't. I am polite in explaining we have a different outlook in good critiques. You continue and become abusive. I ask you not to bother me anymore and unfriend you. But not before you reply with a threat to complain to Chris that I am trying to take over his website. Then you come on TPL and shit on my poem. I post a policy statement that I will only critique by request. You shit on that. In the meantime you're attempting to villify me in any and every way possible with me trying to explain, as I am now, the context you egregiously leave out in every case. What you've posted here is my last response to the shit you wrote on my post about my critique policy change that did not mention you. It is my honest opinion of you and the thoughts that come to mind during the years of your pathological whining and tragic drama that, if anyone had to live around, might evoke in anyone a desire to leave for good. Not having that choice, maybe worse. This has torn off your poorly fitted mask and placed you somewhere between a character in Moliere's La Tartuffe and a couple mentioned in Scott Peck's, The Road Less Traveled. Honestly. JCH

Copyright © July 2012 James C. Horak

Additional Notes:
I will not stand by silently while this creature continues in this vein. It is defamation. JCH


This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2012-07-05 07:04:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Creature? Assumptions and a general characterization by one person which is you JC - ? I keep saying you need to rule your world with words - anyone with any insight - should see that a simple request of mine to you has been blown to proportions well out of hand and how dare you have the nerve to keep focusing on "drama" in my life and insinuating such awful things? That to me says you are so out of control and it's defamation to me - I critiqued your poem and noted your anger in it - it was an observation - clearly you can not keep writing things like this knowing you're the specific cause and person that caused so many people to leave this site. I never did that - you did.......and you were banned from the forum - I never was - Get a grip and get some assistance to your mental health issues - Mine are in tact - Pathological whining? I have to tell you that I might seek counsel now - you have over reacted with all of this - Poorly fitted mask? How dare you? You don't know anything about my personal life or what I do with it - All the good I do for others - You just could not be nice to the new people and now it's my fault - FU...........................................you ogre..............


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