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May I Have This Romance? Hello my dear, my darling thru these years I've been sitting quietly..over here..watchin' them over there, watchin' us.. and wondering.. and so, beautiful lady we needn't be bashful-we needn't be graceful our steps still fold together and honey we need to dance! and the band plays our song oh we've danced to this for so long ...singing it while we fell in love oh yes! My fair lady, "May I have this romance?" let the stars shine in your eyes and the myrth spill from your lips let your soul mingle with mine its~ our~ romance.. your heart is as light as a feather we've been dancing together forever yes, yes Lets dance! |
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2012-03-07 22:45:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
The lightly mixed rhyme is delightful, escaping the perception of contrivance. As is the least contrived
circumstances for "falling in love" the most compelling. Lovely to a man that a lady wrote this. We men tend
to think of courting as labor. But not if we're advised better. As so you have. JCH