This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-05-25 10:33:26 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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WWII made my father a broken man. But my stepfather, at Guadacanal when the Japanese decided to take it back and being reduced to the teens in his unit several times, came home with the strength to survive even the prognosis his feet should be amputated from the â€œjungle rot” he had sustained. Hell no!, he told the VA doctors…and that was the last that pathetic mal-practicing little group saw of him.  Of course, I was not so wise. And in my lengthy foray among VA hospitals, in one I was an in-patient assistant registrar. While admitting new patients, I didn’t always stop with reading who I needed to contact as next-of-kin or to see if any prior orders pertained. I even got to know some of these men myself.  The story, my friends, doesn’t end in the coming home. And both invasions of Iraq are no different. Don’t just wave flags on this Memorial Day, take an active part in helping to improve conditions in these VA hospitals. And you can do that just by visiting someone in them and letting know watchful eyes are observing.  What these men and women have endured should be all they need endure imposed by those they have gallantly served.                                 _____my modest observance of Memorial Day                                        James C. Horak, USN,  SN: 5928151

Copyright © May 2009 James C. Horak


This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-06-02 16:07:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
JCH, Great post, even if not a poem. The suggestion of visiting a wounded vet strikes a core. It is right out of the seven corporal works of mercy, with the timely addition of veteran on Memorial Day. Timely, charitable, and wise. MSS


This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-05-29 12:05:32
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
JC, Complete validation; "those who do not advocate for their own health concerns; will suffer at the hand of the medical practice." "Practice" being the most important word here. Having had many doctors diagnose me with the wrong "illness", I'm completely aware - and enrich my knowledge - daily - my medical clerical background has helped as well. Being informed; not having a degree; but realizing the difference between right and wrong in healthcare. It doesn't end in the coming home; you are so right. My father was in Korea; twice, a medic - but when I try to evaluate the benefits given to the vets then, compared to now - I see a huge void in caring. I've come across some military families who are suffering the brunt of not having the Armed Forces care about them as individuals. A friend of mine had to rush her grandson to the ER; when the Army refused to see him promptly after breaking his ankle. It's so sad. I feel as long as the men and women are willing to go and fight for their country; when they return they should get the respect owed to them for their courage. This can apply to both the military; and the private healthcare sector - to volunteer; to learn - to be there for someone whose misfortune has taken them to where they are - should be recognized by all. Thank you for sharing - God Bless America as we continue Deni
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