This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-01-17 11:47:12 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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From One Time Traveler to Another

Footfalls, light, too soft for intention   traveling light in turn and out Where speed tries but little matters   stars their way still only in distance Would I could train such things   bore through the leaden ways Tunneling through sets of time   worn by thought and nothing more Indifference becomes deep regard   stillness jubilation to a leer  Snarling down to slight bicker   until a whisper deafens To you, to return where you have                      never been And see what you have never seen                 but always known Where we could be as we were                        never And I your smile could take damply. 

Copyright © January 2009 James C. Horak


This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-02-05 18:39:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.87500
James, I think we can return to where we have never remembered we have been........ and see what we have always known......... and be as we possibly were, with a damp smile equally. I think things are eternal and have always been and will always be. Everything is love and shall return to love. In my mind! Of course I'm a romantic. Lovely poem........... Dellena


This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-01-25 23:30:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
James, A profound piece on time travel - an out of body experience, discovery of the unknown, travelling on thought and nothing more. My kind of experience and your experience as a poet does justice to its expression. Regards, Duane.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-01-19 10:09:46
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
JCH, These lines reverberate for me personally, as I think you could imagine. :) I stand humbly before the universe in the sense that I now refuse, and may I forever refuse, to sacrifice it to my human limitations and psychic and social "needs" that would make it a toy to me. It may exist for me, in the sense that I (and you, and all our brothers and sisters) are its crown achievement, but that is something far different from its being my toy, which it most emphatically is not. Just as I am not the toy of my children - though I exist for them and gave them genesis from my loins, with more than a little help from my darling wife :) - and continue to give them life: and they are MY crown achievement. But they do not define me, nor I them. There are things I do not know, and I humbly await their revelation. And I have no preconceived idea as to what it (the blessed universe) will show me. I stand humbly and wait. Time travel? A higher, brother race that is kin and which watches us, or rather monitors us? I have no idea, and discount nothing. Let it (them) come. I do not understand taking the smile "damply." I feel like I should, but I don't. I hate when that happens. :) MSS
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