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Sunrise In Spring You woke me even earlier today than yesterday, bursting in uninvited, making a spectacle of yourself, your face absolutely glowing with a ripeness that only the very young reveal. You rose, and positively danced across my bedroom floor, stepping on both my toes simultaneously. I flung open my robe and allowed you passage up my thin legs and across my belly. You covered my face with kisses-- warm, passionate. And then, like too many past lovers, you moved on to the next available bed. |
Additional Notes:
This is a rewrite of "Sunrise"--a poem submitted earlier. It just wasn't quite right. I think
this is an improvement...
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