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You Know You know you've had a great night when your mind is smiling and your soul has found its laugh You understand the the most difficult of things yet hope still sings through the entirety of your being You know that you are almost there when you dare the impossible of your faith the unbelievable answers to your prayers |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2015-06-30 10:48:09
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Such an upbeat piece Joe! (BTW, double “the” S2L1).
It is often the content of attitude- that drives the moment, but you have also indicated in the content, an external influence that makes everything better.
I like S2L4 “entirety of your being”- matching it with S1L2-4 where the “mind is smiling” and the “soul has found its laugh”. There is a resident freshness when reading those lines that exceed the value of the whole (maybe accenting would be a better word).
A very uplifting piece.