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Rescue Take me with you from this place of too many sunsets and too few moons Of skies obscured by rain and colourless rainbows I long to leave to take desperate flight on the wings of wishes To chug along on the prayer express Deliver me from this place of too many drinks cigarettes butts and crippled matches Cheer me up Sweep me up As long as it is up any up will do. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-07-18 10:05:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Oh Joe, being older; how I enjoyed the too many drinks, cigarettes, and matches (not talking of the incendiary type).
Colourless (I assume you used the british spelling for “color” in the piece- it works), rainbows- what an image #arc-a- medies-
I think, however; other than sharing my affirmation of this particular piece- it might actually take a couple of beers and some good karaoke- to bring you the cheer you request! Well done.