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Love Still Wins I have had lost in my life so far from beyond So far from anything reasonable that my mind or heart still can not touch it I have known the lost of comfort so perfect that since she left I have felt nothing similar, or so close to the mark since then Yet somewhere in me I know that she still loves me all these miles away in all these seconds since her departure I know that Love still wins |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-07-06 09:37:40
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Business first, S1L1 (loss), S2L1 (loss), S1L4 (cannot- one word)
Joe, I have to share that this piece has been written so many times, but so many who share the same.
You interpretation is a pointed as any I have read, or written. Your last stanza taking “time”, “distance”, “emotion”, “departing and tether” all in a single thought winds the entire piece into the single basket of the moment.
I appreciated the piece very much.