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Rest the prayer may rise, or fall fallow. it will be as it will be. a pinprick of light may break, or the dark remain dismal. it will be as it will be. if it falls on the shadow side of the balance, it will be torn, trampled, and be burned with the acid of scorn. it will be as it will be. the inevitability itself, the sudden gust, that last blast, the gleam in the eye of the owl, will be the most intolerable. it will be as it will be. you used to think it was your failing, that He waited for your reason, the baffled world gathered for your brain, but that was your great misprision. it will be as it will be. the prayer may rise, or fall fallow, and those who know will tremble. it will be as it will be. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2012-09-07 11:02:18
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Mark, this is a marvelous poem, it is well composed with simple words that make it profoundly successful. I am really pressed for time but I wanted you to know how much I like this piece. Well done.
Best wishes,
cheyenne