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Five Words and Five Lines For the first is first and the last is last. Our future depends but upon our past. History repeats. |
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just a fun little ditty....if ya' want ta' get nitty.....SMILE and just enjoy it!
This Poem was Critiqued By: Turner Lee Williams On Date: 2006-08-21 09:45:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Ellen--An almost limerick, this brevity of verbiage is both a puzzle and
a sad commentary of humanity's fate. In my opinion, this inference of an
unending cyclic misstep is melancholic. I personally didn't think the work
was fun, but found it poetically and prophetically written. Sorry for my
somber discernment. TLW