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Water Lilies Can a camera capture the stillness of the morning air? Like flies striking glass we fight our way against the wall, while time and timelessness invade our spirits there. Standing on tiptoe, looking over the bushes, I don’t care, that green moss has grown soft in the brick lined mall. Can a camera capture the stillness of the morning air? I listen to my breath, as laughter washes away despair inspiring hope for man’s fight against his eternal squall, while time and timelessness invade our spirits there. A child’s voice asks, “What?” and older eyes stare at the shadows swimming ‘neath the black pool’s ghostly pall. Can a camera capture the stillness of the morning air? “Tadpoles are baby frogs,” his mother laughingly declares. Staring at the reflection her mind cannot recall why time and timelessness invade our spirits there. The pink and purple water lilies float like other floral fare. Mother and son rise slowly and amble to insect mating calls. Can a camera capture the stillness of the morning air, while time and timelessness invade our spirits there? |
Additional Notes:
This is a villanelle.
This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2004-08-03 00:19:00
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.89474
Cameras are amazing instruments, but for all their sophistication, they cannot turn the six senses of reality into the two dimensional world of the lens...but...artfully written words can. Why? Because cameras see with a lens, and words see with the heart. You have shown us your heart. Nice read.