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After Being Critiqued I ate my poem today I tore him limb to limb You said he needed some spicing up I thought he was rather sweet. But after some consideration I decided I wanted to make the dish More palatable. So I am going to take some Ingredients out and add a few others. So with a pinch of this A splash of that, maybe... In other words I'm revising The meal should be ready When hell freezes over. Not meaning that I am never Going to present it for digestion Again, it's just that it will be Awhile for I am letting it stew. |
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